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It was around midnight and every pony was sound asleep in their beds. All accept Prince Nightsky. It was raining down hard outside, harder than it ever did before.  There was the sound of what seemed to be falling debris as the gigantic rain drops pounded against his Royal Window. Prince Nightsky couldn’t take much more of this and awoke with an annoyed growl. The young Prince slowly got up; his purple shimmering mane flowed in the air even though there was no wind current.

He then preceded his advance towards his windows and gazed out into the night, his wonderful creation. “Tis bad enough no pony must stay up to look at thee’s masterpiece, but must thou Pegesei make it even more dreadful with weather?” Prince Nightsky spoke to himself using the ancient tongue of the Dream Mountain Alicorns. He was the only one who spoke this language; no pony knew where he got the knowledge of such speech.  His bangs fell from his eye lids from lack of “ Royal Slumber” .  

Prince Nightsky relocated his sight towards the room behind him. It was a simple Royal Bedroom. It was about the size of two Hotel bedrooms fused together. The young highness pondered why his sleeping courtier was recommended in being so gigantic; he didn’t really need that much space.    Figuring that he was not going to get slumber any time soon he decided to do some kind of activity to past the time until the weather Pegesei ceased the downpour.
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:iconrikusorasephiroth:
~rikusorasephiroth Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Very nice.
Well written, interesting and original.
You're skilled.




...I wish I was
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:iconroyalcanterlot-rps:
thankies. don't worry. it just takes practice.
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~rikusorasephiroth Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I doubt that will be enough.
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:iconroyalcanterlot-rps:
no it will, just practice.
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~rikusorasephiroth Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Your confidence is comforting, but I remain unmoved in my decision. I have never been a good writer, but that's not gonna stop me from trying.
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:iconroyalcanterlot-rps:
:iconyodaplz: No! Don't try, do! There's not try, there's only do!

XD
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~rikusorasephiroth Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yoda doesn't use contracted words.
He says 'do not' and 'there is' as opposed to don't and there's.
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~Royal-Princess-Luna Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice ^^
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~tf2fan2222 Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice you put a lot of detail
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